Dark Armour
In twists, vines of dark tighten.
From shoulder to wrist my arms writhen.
Thorns, sampling my gore.
Suckers, asking for evermore
Those who ask, shall receive.
A merry banquet, of more, pieces, of me.
Bad in luck, you aren’t a Whom,
your name rests over, and under my tomb.
Snake ate its way, replacing your tongue.
An improvement! - Yet to you, I’m not made of fun.
Dead tell no tales…. they can’t mouth asks!
They should’ve chopped you, mopped y_ou,
and drowned
y o u in casks.
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Posted Jan 2, 2023, 7:20 PM UTC · edited