Just finished my first LitRPG novel. Illuminaria - New Roads (110k) - Take 2

So, I announced the completion of this book a week or so ago but thanks to some amazing feedback, it became clear the ending of the book was not nearly as good as it could be. (Hail u/Roboguy519).

The new and improved ending has been posted here:
https://www.wattpad.com/story/321869324-illuminaria-new-roads

I do plan on starting to get the second draft chapters up onto Royal Road this month.

Please feel free to let me know your thoughts on it.