[1510] Labyrinth of Pain, first five pages

I'm looking to submit this novel for publication, so I'm mostly looking to see if the beginning is compelling enough to keep someone reading more. The genre is YA post-apocalypse / science fiction. Any and all comments are welcome. Thanks,

My critique: Then Die Ingloriously 3500

Labirynth of Pain https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UWeK11ypSZpaLnjaP2ltLO5_-j3IvQd5XjsQ76q6slA/edit?usp=sharing