[1144] Subterranean sci-fi fight scene inspired by Vietnam-era tunnel rats

Any and all feedback is appreciated!

This is the first time this character is introduced in the broader sci-fi piece. It also introduces a few other concepts (the Desolation, Anarchists, which will be expanded on later, of course). It's intentionally inspired by tunnel rats and the horrific, brutal underground battles that took place during the Vietnam War. All of that will play into the broader theme/motifs.

It's a flashback to help explain the future actions of the protagonist and the origins of his PTSD.

And just a trigger warning, there's violence here.

Here's the document: [1144]

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