[364] The Gordian Knot

I want general feedback. I also want to know if what I am trying to say comes across. Right now, I'm thinking that this is the final length, but that is flexible to a point. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1yB0s5uxawh4pJ73gO0lWMKGMuu1gHVWeLGYDKK0FT0I/edit?usp=sharing

The Critique I made (now long enough to qualify): https://old.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/10zomkc/362_ya_paranormal_mystery_opening_scene/j8ap9y4/