[1742] Out of Luck

First time posting on this sub..

I am a hobbyist writer who's never written any novel before.. This is the first chapter of my first novel, so let me know how I did or how I didn't. Looking for any critiques. Also, this novel is a Fantasy..

Summary; A couple attempt to explore the city of St. Petersburg together until one of them realizes that not all is what it seems.. His lucky break is cut short when he is confronted by the enemies of his past.

Doc: Out of Luck

Critique: 1948