[1068] Laundry Room

This is a quick scene from a fantasy novel I'm (attempting) writing. Our main characters are just moving into the "my body is betraying me" part of an enemies to lovers burn. I have never written fiction before, so please go nuts.

*Minorly NSFW*

[1068] The Laundry Room

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