[1705] The Composition of Nora Caverlee

Looking to get some feedback for the first chapter of my mystery novel that I'm hoping to publish soon.

I'd love to hear some critiques on my writing in general, errors in my writing style/ things that I can look out for while going through the remainder of my book.

How does this chapter read as an opening to a novel? Does it grab your interest? Does it flow well?

Thank you for everyone who takes the time to read.

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