Lightswitch
(Hello, I'm quite a novice at writing poetry and would love to learn and become better at it, this is one of my first poems that I've actually felt kinda proud of, I realize it's quite short and probably not great but would massively appreciate any feedback you have for either this poem or just poetry in general, thank you all so much)
Encircled in darkness, your eyes will adapt to it, but you'll never have a lightswitch.
Or maybe its there, but you know if you touch it you'll be shocked.
But why reach out, there's comfort in the dark afterall
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Posted Mar 28, 2023, 1:35 AM UTC