ansibleThe Culture•

I didn't understand this at all. Maybe I'm missing too much context.

Also, having a significant conversation between two people without continued hints as to who exactly is speaking gets confusing fast. If you don't like to write "Then X said ...", a technique some writers use is to describe gestures or actions. For example:

Alice stood up with a frustrated look on her face. "You see, this is why I didn't go the board of directors in the first place!"

Bob waved dismissively. "The charter requires us to disclose a problem as soon as the preliminary report is finished."

And so on.

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indraxOP•

FCS stands for Fire Control System.
The code blocks are where Multibird is talking.

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