overachieving business/design major gets rejected from dream schools!
Demographics
- Gender: Male
- Race/Ethnicity: White/Central Asian
- Residence: New York
- Income Bracket: Upper middle class
- Type of School: Public, competitive
- Hooks (Recruited Athlete, URM, First-Gen, Geographic, Legacy, etc.): Double legacy at NYU, first-gen American (refugee parents), LGBTQ+ (ik it's not a hook)
Intended Major(s): Human-Computer Interaction / Business Admin / Interaction Design / Cognitive Science (depends on school but for most I just pitched a combined major of the above)
Academics
- GPA (UW/W): 95W cumulative, 99W junior year (my school doesn't report UW)
- Rank (or percentile): School doesn't rank
- # of Honors/AP/IB/Dual Enrollment/etc.: 11 APs: CSP (4), World (4), Seminar (4), CSA (1 - didn't report), APUSH (4), Lang (5), Bio (4), Macro (taking this yr), Spanish (taking this yr), US Gov (taking this yr), Stats (taking this yr). 8 Dual Enrollment: Law, Finance, Marketing, Accounting, English Lit, English Lang, Anatomy/Physiology, Psychology. Several honors courses as well.
- Senior Year Course Load: AP Macro, AP Stats, AP US Gov, AP Spanish, College Accounting, College Psych, College Anatomy/Physiology, College English Lit, College English Lang
Standardized Testing
List the highest scores earned and all scores that were reported.
- ACT: 33 (36E, 28M, 35R, 32S) - sent to all schools except Stanford
- AP/IB: 4s on all APs except a 5 on Lang and 1 on CSA. Sent all APs to every school (except CSA)
Extracurriculars/Activities
List all extracurricular involvements, including leadership roles, time commitments, major achievements, etc.
- Founding team member/product & design lead at startup*.* Co-founding product/design lead for startup that raised $2M+ in venture funding, launched product with several brands.
- Founder, creative director, and contractor at own design agency. Run software, web, and mobile design agency that has contracted for several top tech companies and returns six-figure revenues.
- Paid research assistant at University of Pennsylvania. Paid researcher at Penn lab in major field. Spent summer before senior year leading formative work for a study.
- Research assistant at Harvard. Research assistant at Harvard lab in major field. Spent summer before junior year contributing engineering/coding work for a project with MassGen hospital
- DECA charter president + state champion. President of my school's DECA charter - placed 1st in NY state last year and 2nd in NY state the year before. Competed at the international competitions in Anaheim, CA, and Atlanta, GA.
- Freelance photographer. Freelance photographer whose work has amassed 10M+ views & downloads and has been featured in Buzzfeed, Adobe, etc.
- Design volunteer for student accelerator for POC. Designed pitch deck & marketing materials for student founders, helping 60+ startups raise $30M+.
- Mock Trial team president/captain + lead attorney. President/captain of my school's mock trial team, lead attorney 3x, consistently top-ranked team in county.
- Lead design mentor (volunteer) for non-profit. Lead design mentor for a non-profit mentorship platform for student interns. Wrote educational articles, held workshops and keynotes, led team of volunteers.
- Independent singer-songwriter. Independent artist - performed at venues like The Bitter End & Carnegie Hall as vocalist and instrumentalist. Wrote & performed ten songs for an album.
Awards/Honors
List all awards and honors submitted on your application.
- 1st Place, NY State DECA Competition (in an entrepreneurship category) - 2022
- 2nd Place, NY State DECA Competition (in an entrepreneurship category) - 2021
- NHS Member
- NY Science Honors Society Member + Delegate
- NYS Business + Marketing Honors Society Member + District Award Winner
Letters of Recommendation
- AP Bio Teacher - 9/10, great relationship w/ her, had her for two years, I'm sure she wrote great things in the letter
- College Marketing teacher / DECA advisor - 7/10, not too close with her but she told me she wrote highly of me
- AP Seminar teacher - 10/10, had her for a few years, have an amazing relationship w her and she loves me
- Boss from EC #1 - 1000/10, made my mom cry
- Trustee on Brown Board of Entrepreneurship - 9/10 (only sent to Brown)
Interviews
I was only offered an interview for Penn & Stanford:
- Penn - 1000/10, convo lasted over 2 hours, she said I was the most remarkable student she's ever met and she would write great things abt me
- Stanford - 7/10, it was alright, a bit awkward but I think I still impressed him
Essays
(Briefly reflect on the quality of your writing, time spent, and topic of main personal statement.)
- Personal statement was very good, made several people cry LMAO. It was about my struggles growing up queer in a conservative/orthodox Jewish community and how I aim to find coevality.
- Additional info essay was good, elaborated on my entrepreneurial & design experiences over the past 7 or so years. Also mentioned my struggles with chronic illness and ADHD.
- All my supplements were good as well, my Stanford, Penn, Brown, Tufts, and Northeastern ones were the best though!
Decisions (indicate ED/EA/REA/SCEA/RD)
Acceptances:
- Northeastern University Oakland - EA (accepted Oakland for first year and then transfer to Boston for the final 3)
- George Washington University - RD (accepted Corcoran Scholars w/ $20k/yr scholarship)
- Case Western Reserve University - Deferred EA, accepted RD
- Stevens Institute of Tech - RD (w/ $30k/yr scholarship)
- University of Maryland - EA
- Macaulay Honors College @ CUNY Baruch - RD (full ride to CUNY Baruch)
Waitlists:
- Wesleyan University
- American University
Rejections:
- Stanford University
- Tufts University
- Brown University (ED)
- University of Pennsylvania
- Cornell University
- Jewish Theological Seminary / Columbia University Dual-Degree
- NYU
Additional Information:
Also mentioned in my resume that I've completed certifications from Princeton, Yale, UVA, IDF, Scrum Organization, etc. For every school that allowed me to, I submitted a portfolio of design work + photography work. Also think that my junior year pre-calc average hurt me (my only C ever).
Overall I'm grateful to have gotten in to where I got in! I was hoping for better but it's completely fine :) I haven't committed yet but I'm deciding between Northeastern & GW atm (leaning towards NEU)!
Posted Apr 1, 2023, 6:52 PM UTC