[3,621] The Cats in 3B
This is a re-working of a piece I submitted a very long time ago. I've completely changed the genre while keeping some of what I enjoyed about the original. My main concern is that there might be some resulting genre confusion so I'm really wondering if the horror elements seem out of place. That said, I wouldn't be surprised if there's bigger problems that I haven't considered. All feedback is very welcome!
Edit: I should have mentioned this is only the first half of the story. The second half will be more focused on the horror and mystery.
Critiques
https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/11tz5vd/1581_flora_chapter_one/jcn3wgx/
Submission
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1C7CfhzlTiL8l8d_dW4NGdOaqbqI_9Xhi/edit
Posted Apr 2, 2023, 10:40 PM UTC · edited