Wrote a song where I am, attempting, to sing harder. I not very good at it but would love feedback

It's like Neil Young merged with Post Malone. I Dig this Bro! Keep Going

Deer hunter vibes.

Love it.

The thing you have going is the transfer emotion.

There are people who can sing better than you but I don't feel anything.

It's like a pretty girl with 0 sex appeal.

It works better in some part better than others. I can hear you forcing it at points but I think if you work on it it will be great.