[1443] Starship Renegade: Battle of First Contact, part 1/2

This is the first half of the origin episode. It’s basically Star Trek but humans are the main antagonists and the MC is a renegade captain who doesn’t play by the rules.

I welcome any feedback but am particularly interested in:

• Do you like the characters (find them interesting)?
• Are the character interactions believable?
• Can you picture what the characters look like? If not, was this distracting?
• I purposely avoided explaining the details of the government/society. Were you intrigued to know more? Are the lack of details distracting?
• Do you feel engaged enough to want to read the second part?

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