[1017] How to Ruin the Future
Hello, this is the beginning of my SciFi/Time Travel novel and any feedback is welcome!
One thing I'm a bit unsure of is the balance between story and infodump. If you have any opinion on that, feel free to share! Apart from that, I'm open to any other criticism as well.
Thank you very much for your help. I appreciate your efforts a lot!
Edit: Thank you for your help!
Posted Apr 14, 2023, 9:59 PM UTC · edited
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