[1682] Draugma Skeu Ch2

Here's the second chapter of a novel. It introduces a new character, so it's (more or less) functional for new readers, though I'm not leaning too hard into the hook.

Mostly, I'm looking for interruptions in the flow. Where does it get
boring or confusing? And where is it most interesting and engaging? Is
the information load too heavy or too light?

The review: [2110]

The story: Draugma Skeu Chapter 2