[448] The Madman of Monero

hello. I just wanted to post the opening of my story to see what you guys had to say about it. Looking for critiques in general about how interested you would be and if my characters action to leave makes sense.

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Link: https://notability.com/n/2WMnPiHy8~59FzdqmjMPKh

Critique: https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/13pyxwk/comment/jma69gu/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3