[2414] A Man Well Hanged (d. 3)
Another stab at a different version of alchemist of alcoholism Soriano the Sober.
For those who commented on previous drafts, thanks again. The fact that this is a very different piece from what came before is more a reflection of me flailing about in discovery than of anything else. I hope that I was able to integrate something of your valuable suggestions despite trying something completely different this time.
As always your attention is appreciated and any feedback you might have would be lovely.
The piece ends abruptly because it's the first half of the chapter.
Link to story: https://docs.google.com/document/d/11OLuhuyrfjM5JugAaqf6QK45keWEurFs8AInhLrMyKw/edit?usp=sharing
Sacrifices for the altar: https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/13wu0i3/2246_lindora_the_wizard_chapter_1/
https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/13thdq2/1545_conspiralcy_chapter_1/
https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/13q7adr/1500_invincible_under_the_moon/
Posted Jun 9, 2023, 8:15 AM UTC · edited