SCP draft

I started writing an SCP but now it seems like it's getting too long and I can't find the right way to continue it, I was planning on making the patient die and then the dolls take on a human form and go on this killing spree and escape the facility, then about a month later some new kid comes in with them, and it all starts happening over again. I was wondering if it was good, and if anybody wanted to help me finish it?

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THE BROKEN DOLLS
//SCP ####//

Object Class: Euclid

Special Containment Procedure: SCP #### along with --'Patient 1'-- 'Patient 2' are to be kept in a concrete, windowless room containing a child's bed, a bedside table, and an empty toy box. At no time should any other toy or child enter the room, if this happens room #### will be held under lock down until further notice. the one and only door to said room will be locked, only exception will be when door is opened to bring in food for the Patient - only level 5 and up personnel may enter room ####.

#### Description: Subjects consist of five antique porcelain dolls. When seen by humans over the age of ten, the objects seem like classic dolls with renaissance attire, the only indicator that these dolls differ from normal is that they don't seem to have mouths. When viewed upon by children, the dolls have obvious damage, e.i. missing limbs, burnt off hair, scratched out eyes, and - Quote "...their mouths are gone when grown-ups are around, but they talk when no one but me is there to hear them." (said Molly ████ [6 years of age] - AKA 'Patient 1').

The specimens were brought in with 'Patient 1', who claimed she had found them at a [REDACTED].

SCP Case: 'Patient 1' and the dolls are taken into observation due to claims from child's mother that the toys are possessed - July 1st 2007 No significant events occur for the several days of observation. The case is labelled as a non-anomaly and SCP decide to take no course of action to contain them. - July 14

First death, Molly's younger brother, Arthur [DATA EXPUNGED] slit throat and [DATA EXPUNGED]. The following morning he was found, with his mouth stapled to look like he was smiling, [DATA EXPUNGED]. - July 17

After the death of the Patient's brother Arthur, 'Patient 1' and dolls are accepted into SCP facilities - July 18th.

First Interview with 'Patient 1' - July 19

//Interview with 'Patient 1'//
//July 19th 2007//
//Room ####//
//Dr. James ██████//

//Interviewer:// "So, Molly, can you tell me about what your dolls look like?"

[Patient refuses to look up from her lap, where sits 'Specimen 1'.]
Molly: "Well, they look a little scary, but it's not their fault. they say that they used to be pretty.."

//Interviewer:// "Can you hear your toys speak?"

//Molly:// "Only my dolls, and they only talk at night, when everyone is sleeping but me."
[Patient absentmindedly brushing the doll's hair]

//Interviewer:// "What things do they talk about?"

//Molly:// "They talk about how bad other kids are are, and they tell me to hurt them... to kill them."

//Interviewer:// "Do you want to hurt anybody?"

//Molly:// "I... maybe, I guess."

//Interviewer:// "Have you ever hurt anybody?"

//Molly:// "..."

//Interviewer:// "Molly, can you answer my question, please?"

//Molly:// "No, they don't want me to. When I do something they don't want me to, they say really mean things."

//Interviewer:// "Ok, that's ok you don't have to tell me anything you don't want to. Do your dolls often tell you to do things you don't want to do?"

[Patient frowns but refuses to answer questions for the remaining duration of the interview.]
End of first interview

Molly begins to feel weaker, she is lethargic and refuses to do anything other than care for her dolls and sleep . - July 22

//Dr. James ██████ : "Molly ████ has now been in my care for fifteen days. The dolls have started to move in front of adults, but only to show signs of aggravation when kept away from patient, or when put in a room with other toys. We've experimented several things, but the dolls seem to react most when away from Molly. We left the dolls in a secure room and placed molly in a room a few meters away, the dolls started to twitch and eventually stood up and started smashing their fists on the walls. we then let a level 4 member enter the room but she was quickly extracted when [REDACTED]. I grow wary of these specimens, they seem to get stronger while molly fades away. Molly often awakes screaming in the night. We hear her mumbling to her dolls before she falls asleep, telling them she doesn't want to do what they're telling her to do. I must stay professional, but my heart aches for this little girl, she has no friends, no family, all she has is five psychopathic dolls and a box to put them in.... Clears throat In any case, I have yet to find out why Molly seems to be changing, and I've yet to know whether or not Molly can be extracted from the specimens without harm. I will inform you of my later progress. Dr. James ██████, case log over."// - August 2

Dolls are examined and tested, research shows that dolls are made of biological material. Upon trial it is documented that their skin is impenetrable - August 4

Molly falls into a coma - August 19

Dolls are moved to a separate room.
Molly's condition improves - August 21

Dolls break out of room and kill two level 6 personnel via slit throats.
Dolls are placed back into Molly's room - August 23

An inexplainable layer of skin starts to form over Molly's mouth, upon trial it is documented that it can not be pierced therefor can not be removed - August 24

Molly's mouth is completely engulfed. Her nutrient supply has been switched from feeding tube to IV plug - August 26