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Financial-Produce997•

It’s way too long. Keep it only 1 page.

You list too many skills. Remember that you need to tailor your resume to each job. Keep only the skills that the job requires and cut out the rest. Some of them are really not…necessary. “Materials ordering” and “Daily Reports”? Really just not needed.

Your professional summary needs to be tailored. You mentioned project manager AND technical writer. This makes you look unfocused. A recruiter hiring for a project manager thinks you’re a technical writer, and a recruiter hiring for a technical writer thinks you’re a project manager.

Bullet points for each job need to be about accomplishments, not just listing the same stuff from the job description. Use numbers and statistics to show how you succeded. They also need to relate to the job you’re applying for.

Your Education section is also too long. You do not need two separate entries for a bachelor’s and minor. Keep them both under the same umbrella of your university.

Your last job was in 2022. What have you been doing since then? If you were in college, you need to put the year of your graduation so we know.

“Language” section is not necessary because it’s assumed that you can speak English in North America. Also, if you’re C1 in English, you can just list your native language.

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notmik8•

Calm down with the skills yeah? Cut that back a lot. Literally. Cut that in half. Keep it to one page.

Lets go for 4-5 bullets for your experience.

Now this is just my personal preference but as a grad, i would want the education first and awards at the end. If theres no space cut those awards.

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