[892] Sector L7 [first half of Chp. 1]

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Hi. Remember me? If not, Sector L7 is a sci-fi/thriller story in the works about a climate struck world fighting over some GMO bug shit.

SECTOR L7

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After taking some time to really take in all the feedback I've gotten over the past couple months, this is hopefully the last time I will need to post this introduction.

Any and all feedback is greatly appreciated, but above all I want to know if you would read on to the second half of this chapter based on the excerpt. Cheers!