[4243] I'm Nathan, Dammit

Hi all. Please see linked the opening chapter to "I'm Nathan, Dammit!", a sci-fi/dark comedy about a man who stumbles upon a peculiar-looking corpse in his new flat.

Opening Chapter: I'm Nathan, Dammit!

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