[2100] Husband Material, Part 1 of Chapter 1

Hi everyone, I'm looking for feedback on the first part of the first chapter of my horror novel, Husband Material.

Chapter 1 (partial)

Critique here (2211)

TW:

At the very end, there is a short, relatively non-explicit sex scene that, while not a rape scene, is meant to make the reader feel a little icky about issues of enthusiasm/consent. Just a heads up!