[3819] Harvest Blessing Sections 3-4

I'm back with sections 3-4 of my Story Harvest Blessing. For new readers, I'd recommend skimming the previous post made here

For those returning, I have not touched my story since the when I posted sections 1-2. None of your suggestions for how to improve the story have been added. This is so you as readers get a better idea of what my plan was as I wrote it, and I get a better overall picture of the issues and potential solutions

Here's Sections 3-4

And here's my critiques

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