[2063] Untitled, YA Fantasy Romance

Hi all,

New writer looking for any feedback. Story is an urban YA fantasy with a bit of romance in it. English is not my native language so I'm always open to any suggestion, grammar lessons, etc.

Synopsis:

Violet Morris lives in Blackwell's House of Horror, tending to the mansion with her trusted ghost companion, Bobby Blackwell. Her life changes when she finds an ancient artifact hidden in the house's cellar. With the help of a gray-eyed stranger, she uncovers the world of magic and sorcerers.

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