[3023] The Perfect Man

Hi all! Looking for some feedback on this short story. Any thoughts on the following would be great:

1. characters

2. pacing

3. prose

4. overall impression - specifically, does this remind you of anything, whether in subject matter or writing style, etc? I was going for something specific and I'm not entirely sure I got it.

Thanks a million in advance!

[2049] The Last Fig

[2757] After Credits

Here's my story:

The Perfect Man