[522] Green Valley 1971

Critique Southam on Sea

Hi DRs, a short short that has some similarities to the work of Russell Banks and Raymond Carver. As a piece of so-called flash fiction, there might be some readers who find the brevity frustrating. This is my first post so if I've fluffed something, please bear with me. Looking for feedback on the flow, potency and self-sufficiency of the story. As a native of the antipodes, I incorporate a range of Australian slang and idioms in my fiction so get ready for blokes, sheilas and roos. Not too much of it in this work, though. Thanks.

Green Valley 1971

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