[2462] Jakar

Welcome fellow Destructive readers,

So my first post on here, I have done several reviews (Hopefully up to scratch) 2690 813 3023 This is my first ever attempt of writing a novel. I have proof read several times so hopefully it is somewhat readable. It maybe a prologue however it might just also be used as background later on. The main character of this is designed to be somewhat vague as they are involved in several plots and this siege is a major point for various plots hence maybe a prologue.

Only really have 4 questions for you, the rest of the critic flame away.

Tone of the story - What would you say you feel about tone of war and how it is portrayed. Did you feel like the character had any moral dilemma? Flow/Speed - I feel like some of it drags and some rushes if you notice this please mention when I don't want to give you bias beforehand. Were there any particular scenes or descriptions that stood out to you as memorable or vivid? Are you interested? Would you want to read on? - simple yes or no and a reasoning as a conclusion if possible.

Without anymore - Story here - https://docs.google.com/document/d/11pg0rlQkNOZ2tkRQl7F4CQbVEw45fwhVthWfQR0JlgQ/edit?usp=drivesdk