[974] The Little Bird Nesters

Hi all, this is the first (almost) short story I've ever written, so do expect a bit of amateurishness. The plot is quite bare, without a great degree of conflict, in a childish sort of way. I wrote the short story as an exercise.

Please point out areas where my prose or pacing is off. Anything helps, so if something sucks, I do want to know if it sucks but also why. It would also help to know what I've done well, so I can hang onto those good bits of prose.

Thanks to you all for whatever you can help with!

The Little Bird Nesters (Google Docs)

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