[1933] Icy Roads
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Reupload for shorter word count. Sorry if it appears twice, I did it wrong the other time but deleted.
CW for mentions of suicide attempts, and a bad injury.
Looking for any critiques, but especially interested in knowing if the story is interesting or feels a little boring/flat. Thanks in advanced!
Posted Oct 1, 2023, 3:11 AM UTC
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