[1835] Character intro for a fantasy novel

This is the third chapter of a novel, but it introduces a new character, so you can read it without needing to know what happened in earlier chapters.

Questions:
Where does it drag or get boring?
How well is information about the world released? Is there too much? Not enough?
How interesting is Tesni as a character?

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The Chapter: Tesni's intro

My critique: [2064]

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Cheers!