[1672] J. Duncan: Monsters and Mishaps intro

After repeated attempts for the full version, I've finally decided to just go with the intro.

Synopsis: Duncan, a hunter with a penchant for monster murder, finds a lucrative job offer. But this time me may have bitten off more than he could chew.

It's urban fantasy btw, I can't edit the flair on mobile 💀

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How does it work as an intro? Does it set up the plot well? Am I too descriptive or not descriptive enough? Does it work to hook this world?

Crits:

[2166] First chapter of a fantasy novel

[1667] Innocent Witches Never Burn Twice