[880] The Big Spooky Hoot

Anybody willing to critique a children's picture book (sans the pretty pictures)?

I would especially like to know if:

• the tone of this piece is too heavy for children.
• If it read smoothly and the prose is alright.
• How you felt while reading it.
• If you would read a similar story to a child you know?

Thank you in advance!

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The Big Spooky Hoot

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