seeking previewers for the first four chapters of my book

hi!

im just a hobbyist but i would really appreciate some feedback back on my writing so far! i linked a survey at the end so if you feel inclined to fill it out, I would deeply appreciate it!

for you convenience, im looking for advice regarding readability, emotional impact and clarity in visual descriptions.

thanks!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1USUiL4tklS_QURDYAYN5yli80TByPO-40pSM6ouTc5U/edit