[370] Blade of Roses

Fantasy

Hey. I'm an unpublished writer. In the past, I've had trouble with meandering plot lines and skipping moments or otherwise jolting. I'm really open to any and all critiques.

EDIT: it's about grave robbers and giant goddesses!

Critique

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Posted Nov 25, 2023, 9:11 PM UTC · edited

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