[1534] Untitled college story - Chapter 1

Novice writer here. I usually write more action-driven scenes with little dialogue. I decided to do a little light-hearted romance to try something different.

You might have seen this earlier. I posted this last night, but I didn't have enough "critique credits".

Some disclaimers/concerns I have:

-I'm not a native speaker, so please point out punctuation mistakes and inconsistent/unnatural slang

-I will focus more on the female lead on the next chapter, so I kept her physical appearance vague for now.

-I have some issues with pacing and foreshadowing that I can't quite pinpoint.

Here it is.

My critique:

[1590] Divergence

Thank you!