[1,475] I Think I'm Becoming A Mom - Chapter 2

TW: Teen Pregnancy, Eating Disorder

Critique: [1946] Daughter of Wrath CH. 1

I previously posted this chapter for review, so if it looks familiar that's why! I incorporated the feedback I received and wanted to post it again to see if I was successful in my revisions.
In my previous post, the big critique was the scene between the main character (Sophie) and an employee at Albertson's (Mark). The critiques said the scene felt awkwardly written and unrealistic, so I'm hoping it's a little more grounded and real this time around.
Thanks in advance for your feedback! Here's I Think I'm Becoming A Mom - Chapter 2.