[1134] The Liminal Thread - Pt5

Hey yall. This is a POV chapter for another character in the story I've been workshopping here

My biggest concern here is with the POV, because I'm framing this as Jose slipping back into a memory (which he gets pulled out of at the end of this chapter, I just split this up for wordcount), so I do changed the tense but intentionally so. But any and all feedback is appreciated as it's ultimately all helpful

Story

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