[1306] Existence

Hello, here is a link to a short story I wrote. I welcome any and all feedback. Thanks!

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mShnHHgekWR78jx7nPtuMGP7ofQPN2olBl6iJ0iExl0/edit?usp=sharing

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Critique:

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/18jualu/comment/ke0mfbp/?context=3