[2063] A Portal Fantasy - Chapter 1
This is the first chapter of a portal fantasy novel. I would love any feedback on any aspect of the chapter such as plot, pacing, characters and prose. As a portal fantasy, there is only a hint of fantastical elements in the first chapter, which I worry about. I appreciate all and any feedback. Thanks!
For the Mods: My critique - [2912]
Posted Dec 28, 2023, 9:10 PM UTC
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