[2350] Day of that Dare

Hello everyone. This was my first story ever, also my first ever submission here and I remember it was shredded to bits and pieces. It’s been a little over an year, and this sub has helped me evolve so much as a writer since then.

I found it again among my files yesterday and decided to give it read. Boy, was it tough! I somehow managed to make a few minor edits. This story has been through 3 edits now and here’s the latest version.

I hope at least a few of you are able to reach the end, and if you do please let me know any and all of your thoughts. Thank you!

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