[354] WIP-Cycle (Not settled on the title)

Trying to write the story of a man who hates himself, finds a friend, supportive, he (the friend) helps the guy to finally appreciate himself, but the guy (main character) never (almost) asks his friend how he is feeling. The friends mental health deteriorates and he kills himself.

It's a third class story, I know that. The main objective of mine to write this was it's last scene (havent written yet) in which the main character is at the funeral and looks himself in the mirror, and says

"You might not be the smartest, you might not be the loveliest, you might not be the most intelligent or charismatic man out there. But goddamnit youre something."

https://docs.google.com/document/d/10a1MmQZelgzqk-QPAkGIqvpP1WsBX0geVDGtTtqYtBE/edit?usp=sharing

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