[2210] Castelle Living Room (Litfic/Short Story)

First time poster, so you better tear it up and send me crying home to mama. I've only written a handful of stories after high school (this is one of those), so I guess I'm a "new" writer, but don't pull the punches, I've been around the block. I wrote this some time ago, looked it over again and decided to get some honest eyes on it. I struggle to decide if its length is appropriate. I originally had something longer in mind, but settled on short just to get it on paper. Anyway, I don't what to steer anyone's criticism, so I won't say anything else.

If its not terrible, I thought I might submit it somewhere, so if anyone had any places they know I should check out, that would be great since there are 1.4 billion lit mags and contests to sift through.

Castelle Living Room

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