[2314] Dinner

Hello! This is my first time posting here! This portion is the first scene of the story I've been working on recently. Any advice or feedback is greatly welcomed! Thank you so much in advance. I don't have any specific questions in mind just the general what do you think. Please be brutally honest if you have to, I appreciate any and all opinions/suggestions/etc. Thank you again!

Link:Dinner (placeholder title), Chapter 1, Scene 1

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