[520] All For the Cameras

Hey all! This piece is a little different than most of my writing as this is supposed to resemble a TMZ-esque article (rather than be really good writing lol) within the universe of my story.

I was hoping to open my story with this. For context on the main story: these two celebrities are made to fake date to fix their image but fall in love with these two maids at the motel they're staying at while filming their movie and have to now juggle their movie, their fake relationships and now their real ones. There's drama, scandals and I hope to include a bunch of little articles and stuff like this throughout to really hammer home the celebrity and "limelight" thing.

My main ask for feedback is if this reads like a real tabloid article? I don't often read those and I really tried my best but want to know if it seems real. Also is the concept of inputting these kind of expository articles etc even a good idea? Any other feedback on it is welcome too!

Link to piece: All For the Cameras - HollyWorld Starz article

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