[1637] - This Hallowed House

Hello all! These are the first five pages of my Middle Grade fantasy novel and I could really use some fresh eyes. Any and all feedback welcome, do your worst!

Some questions:

• Is the main character engaging?
• Is the setting clear? What's your impression of where/when this is set?
• How does the pacing feel? Does anything drag or feel clunky?
• Does the number of characters feel too overwhelming?
• Where did you stop reading/Would you keep reading?

Short blurb for the book: >!When a tiny house elf accidentally draws the attention of ancient and dangerous fae, she and a group of unlikely allies must fight to defend their way of life and the humans they live with.!<

The Google doc

My critiques:

• [1115] Epilogue — May 27th 1827
• [672] Scenery Story

Thank you!