Hey all, I took the feedback I received last week and erased the story and started again taking onboard some of the advice I was given. 

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This is the opening chapter to my untitled novel. It is a modern fantasy novel set in an undisclosed Scandinavian country. It will, eventually, involve gods, and monsters, and a lot of fantasy elements that are going to be hidden from the "real world" in universe. Feedback is, of course, appreciated, and please don't hesitate to be harsh, I can take it.

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[The story](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1owVyxTZDgEXlNBV7Buu1sMK23LZ5rH9n/edit?usp=sharing&ouid=117415476099486217345&rtpof=true&sd=true)

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[My Latest Critique](https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1b5uosn/comment/kwcuh6x/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web3x&utm_name=web3xcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=share_button)

[My Other Critique](https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1b9wtzg/comment/kvf0opq/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web3x&utm_name=web3xcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=share_button)

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[My Other CritiqueM](https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1b9wtzg/comment/kvf0opq/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web3x&utm_name=web3xcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=share_button), appreciate you guys.

[914] Still untitled modern fantasy novel