MineZ tutorial series to help new players

I've recently decided to make an entire series dedicated to helping the new players of MineZ. The decision came after I made a video on my YouTube channel talking about MineZ. I had many viewers who wanted to get into MineZ, but didn't know where to start. I figured that these videos could help a large group of people, so I am deciding to go through with it. I am starting with the cities/important landmarks, and making a video about each, showing off where the good loot is, showing callouts, etc. The reason I am making this post is because I need your help! I am trying to make this series the most informative, and simple guide to helping the new players as possible. If you are a MineZ veteran or you think you could help and you would like to give some constructive feedback on my first city tutorial (Romero), the link will be below. Thanks for taking the time to read and happy zombie hunting!

TL;DR - I would appreciate some constructive feedback on a MineZ tutorial video, link is below.

Romero Tutorial: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nrEoKrFUr0U&feature=youtu.be