[Critique] No replies last time I posted so I figured I'd try again.

I have significantly improved my first message quality since setting up my account 2 months ago. I'm getting over a 90% profile view rate on my messages so I assume there is something with my profile that is turning women off. I have constantly been altering my profile so it has been different throughout these numbers although the pictures have remained primarily unchanged.

www.okcupid.com/profile/Nicklin19/