Partially Done College Term Paper - Due 4/15 but would like quick feedback

Hello, I am needing someone to proofread over my term paper/outline that I have done so far. I have some comments on the actual document itself which can be found here: https://docs.google.com/file/d/0BwzOr_sBzeOEd1NFWkU4QUhmMFE/edit?usp=sharing

Any other questions or concerns I'd be happy to answer here or in private messages. Thanks in advance!! Also, I am not sure if I should have broken it into 2 paragraphs but I did. :\